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title: "Passive Voice"
date: "2026-10-15"
updated: ["2026-10-16"]
description: "Reflection on paragraph construction"
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Over this week, I have written tens of paragraphs. I've noticed a pattern. When I write using the active voice, the structure of my paragraphs becomes more self-evident. But when I use passive voice, the sentences become circuitous and can develop fragments.

I liken passive voice to a disease on a plant.

Picture a bush with small dark green heart-shaped leaves, slight yellow undertones and spindly wooden stick stems.

The active voice is a hearty and healthy bush. It discovers the right nutrients, drinks enough rainfall, and basks in both dew-filled mornings and stark dry afternoons. 

In contrast, the passive voice is a red mottled bush. It finds no food, suffocates in excess water, and curdles in perpetual clawing humidity.